Think About Your Writing Pg 70

Throughout the last week, I send an email to the Seattle Theatre group about a concert I went to last month. My cousins and I waited across the street in line for over 7 hours, but when we were allowed in, people who were behind us, who were in line 3 hours after we were, crossed the street and ran in front of us and other people who were waiting an easy twelve hours. We couldn’t go into the theatre in front of them, because we weren’t allowed to cross, but the people behind us ran across the street into traffic anyway and got into the theater first (even though I hoped natural selection would take its place). Even though security yelled at the people crossing the street that were behind us, they didn’t do much of anything to make sure that we entered on a first come first come first serve basis. The overall point of me writing this e-mail was to maybe persuade them to come up with a different system for the lines, and to possibly get all or some of my money back. I hopefully was persuasive enough to make them consider giving my money back to me.