Tuesday, November 24, 2015

Rough Draft Paper 3



 Jacob Kirsch

                 In 1983, a ban took place against men who had sex with men, also known as MSM, to give blood. According to GMHC.org, a movement to fight aids, the ban was carried out to, “to help prevent inadvertent transmission of HIV through blood transfusions. At that time, HIV/AIDS was largely not understood by doctors, scientists, and the general public, and the technology and procedures used to test donated blood for HIV were extremely limited.” The ban is on any man who has had sex with another man since 1977, even if the man who wants to donate is HIV negative, always practices safe sex, and even has been in a monogamous relationship for most of their life and has never had intercourse with anyone but their male partner. This ban is completely outdated, and is a huge form of discrimination towards these men. Some transgender woman are also affected by this as the ban is against birth sex and not gender.
                This ban is a huge form of discrimination to these people by not letting them be a part of an activity that helps people and saves lives everywhere. With the incredible advances we have been making in the world of medicine, donated blood is tested for a lot of diseases such as syphilis, HIV, hepatitis, and HTLV (human T-lymphotropic virus). Since this ban has not been brought to light since 1977, the FDA has not considered all of the advances in the world of medicine to remove this ban.
This ban is also discriminatory because of the stereotypes it can create. According to GMHC.org this ban creates lots of negative stereotypes for LGBT+ birth assigned males, for example, that heterosexual people have an extremely low risk to the virus, while saying that LGBT birth assigned men are at a hugely horrifying risk for it. Another stereotype that can be created is that these men are
                Another way this ban seems to be a clear form of discrimination is that women who have had sex with a MSM man is able to donate blood (FDA forum/wiki article?). Women who have sex with MSM men are able to donate blood a year after having sexual intercourse with a MSM male, yet even a man who’s been in a monogamous relationship since the seventies with their partner who has not had sex with anyone but him and are both people who have taken an HIV test that came back negative are not able to donate a drop of blood. Why should a woman or a straight man who’s had unprotected sexual intercourse with an array of partners be able to donate blood while these LGBT+ birth assigned males are not?
                A lot of questions come up in response to argument, a question that is very popular is this one, “what if a man or transgender woman who has had sex with a man lies about having HIV when the ban is lifted?” This question has an easy answer, HIV tests. Technically anyone can lie about their HIV status, but since clinics and blood drives do HIV tests on donated blood, this is not a problem. When donating blood you’re supposed to fill out a form by the FDA, in which you have to disclose your gender and depending on your birth assigned gender whether or not you’ve had sex with another man, (FDA forum). So whatever a person’s sex is or whatever their sexual orientation is, if they lie about being HIV negative, they will be caught. If this ban was lifted there would be the no problems, or the same problems that people who are able to donate blood have now. Other arguments could come up that are homophobic, such as saying, “it’s bad to be homosexual so it’s bad for them to donate blood” These stances and views are completely bias. Medically, lifting this ban would only help people and save lives
                Overall, the ban could actually be hurting the whole point to blood drives and blood donations, to give blood to people who need it. GMHC.org states that, “There is strong opposition to blood drives at many colleges, which only serves to reduce the blood supply. For example, San Jose State University does not allow blood drives on campus because the ban violates the university’s nondiscrimination policies.” Even how some colleges aren’t allowed to do blood drives because it violates their nondiscrimination polices shows how this is a huge form of discrimination. Another way this ban hurts the whole point of blood drives and blood donations is how much they lose from not letting LGBT+ birth assigned MSM males donate. The whole essence of blood donations could be hurt by how much blood could be received from LGBT+ birth assigned men. Going back to GMHC.org, “according to one estimate, over 130,000 gay and bisexual men from donating over 219,000 pints of blood annually. “ A graph from The Huffington Post created by The Williams Institute at the University of California that studies lesbian, gay, bisexual, transgender, etc issues confirms this estimate.
http://big.assets.huffingtonpost.com/GayBloodBan2_2.png 
                This graph shows the number of men likely to donate that would not have been able to before and the number of pints of blood likely to be donated with three scenarios, from left to right, if the ban was lifted for LGBT+ birth assigned men, if there was a twelve month deferral from donating meaning that they would have to wait a whole year after having sexual intercourse, and the last scenario shows the data after a five year deferral from donating. According to The Huffington Post, the FDA is recommending that it be changed to the twelve month deferral as stated, and each person who donates blood would have to have other evidence (which from all the evidence brings me to believe that it will be an HIV test).
                This topic is something that needs more awareness for everyone, especially LGBT+ people and LGBT+ allies. There is lots of evidence proving that we can safely allow LGBT+ birth assigned men to donate blood that will help millions of people all around the United States, so why not do it? Yes, the FDA has made some strides to help, for example, the one year deferral stated above, and yes this has had some awareness, for example, The Gay Blood Drive. This organization focuses on trying to make people aware of this outdated ban and how it focuses purely on “sexual orientation instead of sexual behavior and personal risk” (which if I have not mentioned before, is a huge form of discrimination.) They have a huge blood drive in different places around the US, and have an LGBT+ birth assigned male bring an ally to donate for them to show their willingness. They will write a message to the FDA and have their ally put on a nametag, they will then take a picture of the two people with the nametag and message, and then send the picture, nametag, and message to the FDA. At their last blood drive, over 1500 eligible allies donated, and over 1500 LGBT+ birth assigned men participated. This organization spreads the word of the ban that if lifted, could save a large number of lives. Even though this issue does have awareness, we need more to make the change.
                Overall, this ban has evidence against it that proves it to be outdated. We can do tons of tests to make sure that these men and transgender women are clean and ok to give blood which could saves tons of lives. Even though the FDA has been making certain efforts to change it, they don’t seem to be thinking about the reality of the ban and what it is preventing. We need to bring more awareness to this issue with more organizations such as the Gay Blood Drive. I hope this paper made you aware of this problem and how it affects almost everyone. If this ban is lifted, we will be able to save an incredible amount of lives.
https://www.mskcc.org/about/get-involved/donating-blood/after-blood-donation

(This is still a rough draft. I need to put my citations in the correct places :D )

Thursday, November 19, 2015

In Class Lab 11/19 "Incorporating Sources Effectively"



Quotation from an online magazine with no page numbers:
In an interview with Martin Algaze on the ban of gay and bisexual men giving blood, the spokesman for Gay Men’s Health Crisis states, “The existing policy is archaic and discriminatory because it falsely assumes that all gay men are HIV-positive regardless of their sexual behavior. At the same time, it allows heterosexuals to donate blood even if they have participated in risky sexual or drug-use behavior,”
Paired quotations from an online magazine with no page numbers:
In the online petition to lift the ban on gay and bisexual men giving blood, the creator Andrew Heugel states his opinion that, “. . . with more advanced testing methods used in all blood drives [such as HIV and aids testing] that this ban should be lifted to not discriminate against Gay men”. Andrew also adds, “it would increase our blood supply and overall community health.”
https://www.change.org/p/gay-men-should-be-allowed-to-donate-blood
Paraphrase from an online magazine with no page numbers:
According to an article by Everyday Health some HIV screening tests can detect signs of HIV infection within 20 minutes.
http://www.everydayhealth.com/hiv/diagnosis/

Work Cited:

Segan, Sascha. “Ban on Gay Blood Donors May End.” ABC News ABC News,

               14 Sep. 2015. Web. 19 Nov. 2015.

Heugal, Andrew. “Gay Men Should be Allowed to Donate Blood.” Change.org
             Change.org, Inc., 2011. Web. 19 Nov. 2015.

Bennington-Castro, Joseph. “HIV Tests and Diagnosis.” Everyday Health
              Everyday Health Media, LLC, 11 Jun. 2015. Web. 19 Nov. 2015.


In Class Lab 11/19

Comparing Spriggs’ essay with our homework analysis.
All of our short stories involved picture examples, as well as Spriggs’ essay.
They also all involve logos.
At the beginning all of our short stories and Spriggs’ essay talk about their position and what they will later on talk about in the paper.
Our short stories provide a small part that includes background information.
They involve good reasons with evidence that helps support their claims.
Some of the short stories included opposing views on the situation, whereas some did not.
All included an authoritative tone in the short stories/essay.

All of our stories and Spriggs’ essay appeal to the intended audiences.

Wednesday, November 18, 2015

Thinking about the text

1. Katherine Spriggs does convince me that this topic matters by telling us facts about how it's affecting earth overall, and how it is also a healthier alternative. She establishes the importance by having lots of evidence to back up her statements. It really opens the eyes for the readers.
2. Katherine Spriggs considers lots of positions other than her own. For example, talking about how certain fruits do only grow in certain parts of the year, so without importing them, we wouldn’t be able to have those fruits year round, she also responds to it by saying how we would appreciate the fruits more if we didn’t always have access to them.
3. I found that the portion at the end of her persuasive paper was kind of ineffective, the part that talks about how we would appreciate fruits more if we didn’t always have access to them.  It doesn’t really appeal to the audience’s views. If someone REALLY loves strawberries, and if all of a sudden they could only purchase locally, they would be mad that they could not just go out and get their favorite fruit.
4. The photos in Spriggs’ essay contribute to her argument by creating a picture for the reader, for example, the first picture of locally grown vegetables makes the reader feel healthy and just gives you an overall good vibe. This obvious helps Spriggs’ stance, which sways the reader to that stance as well.